Contest #3

21

entries

$250

up for grabs

"I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work."

- James Baldwin

Winning Stories

1.
Six or Seven: Scotch, Neat. by drlisse

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work.  Normally I sat with my head tilted down, hands lightly placed on top of my briefcase with a wary and distant look in my eyes.  It had taken me years to perfect that look, but now I was sure I could pass for a true New Yorker – as long as I didn’t open my mouth.  I still had a bit of the Texan drawl which I had never lost.  The boys at the office call me Cowboy Bill or Billy the Kid because of...read more

2.
Triple Homicide on Train FA-7 by Gaudrhin

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. Then I read about it again on the news banner that passed in my vision, directly on my retinas. They really wanted this guy caught, if they were beaming it to me. Triple homicide. Not quite what you would call a "savory character." Jon Fredericks was not the kind of guy you wanted to take home to meet the parents.

The subway was crowded, and every eye on every passenger twitched left to right in a quick saccade as the...read more

3.
The Review by Keledae

            I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work.

“A delicate dance on the tongue.” That was what the review said about my ex-husbands new Merlot. I couldn’t believe it he had actually done it. I stared at the black phone on my desk like it was the killer in a b-list horror movie, stunned at the news. I don’t know how long I sat there, in my 22nd floor corner office...read more

Other Entries (in no particular order)

Quick Skim by Zack

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. Little did I know how quickly something that seemed so insignificant would change everything. I laughed to myself, thought bullshit, and left the paper on the seat of the train as I left. It wasn’t even on...read more

till death do us part. by nickcutter

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work.  My last day working ever, actually. the head line stands out like a fish in the middle of a desert.

casualties confirmed: 159 left dead. by what?...read more

Jagged little pill by srnityblu

  I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. They supposedly had finally gone and done it. I thought to myself as I flipped through the pages to continue the story. The headline was bold as bold could be and still with the words standing there in Helvetica...read more

The Demise of Mr.Thatcher by mikey

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. An intriguing article in the "Death Quarterly" newspaper about the demise of one of the most important men of our time, Charlie Thatcher. A man just as much hated as he was loved. A man who had everything he wanted in the world...read more

Frozen Tears by boniface11

     I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. The story was about a young girl. I knew it was the same girl because the paper said that she was abducted on Friendship Heights NW. That’s where I lived at the time. I also knew it was the same girl...read more

Solace Abused by graceymaimai

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. It was one of those moments that, in the cartoons, I would have had occasion for steam to pour out my ears and my hat to fly off my suddenly overheated head (from, I assume, a build up of pressure from the heat). In a cartoon,...read more

News by ebrahits

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. She said this to me in the morning, avoiding eye contact.

 

“What do you mean?” I said, incredulous. “In the newspaper? Are you...read more

Facing the Storm by ledbyalittlechild

                I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work.  The headline read “Lightning and Thunder Hits Best-seller List: Unknown Author Has Overcome the...read more

A Perfect Objectivity by tworeeler

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. Well, I wasn't really reading the paper...I was looking at it, in an attempt not to engage a bedraggled homeless man who was asking people for change. A woman seated to my left made the mistake of meeting his eyes, and I smiled to...read more

Encounter by k80702

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work.

Mystery Man Saves Ten in Fire.  The paper heading screamed at me from the top of the page, demanding my attention.  I couldn’t seem to look away.  Could it possibly be him?  It had been so...read more

Look No Further by Dean

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. I don’t know why it caught my eye. I guess it was the heading “Newspapers Are Dying”. It was an article about the demise of newspapers in a world dominated by the internet, television, and technology. It was a...read more

Sins of the Father by RoseByAnotherName

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. Until that moment, I had believed that I’d gotten away with it completely, that nobody other than me even realized that it had taken place. With the knowledge that this was no longer true, my entire sense of security...read more

Hannah by Jenny B

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work.  A sample sale for my favorite handbag designer, Dovebags, was being held in the city!  This very rarely happened, and I assumed the current economic recession was hitting luxury brand designers hard enough for them to...read more

The Next-to-Last One Night Stand by jholland

 

"I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work." The frantic man muttered as his fiancee opened the door to greet him. Still clasping the somewhat battered flowers, he slid down the doorjamb and collapsed to the tiled entryway floor.

 

"James,...read more

The Announcement by chaotic_calm

            I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. If I had it to do over again, I never would have even glanced at the paper lying in the seat beside me that morning. When I picked up the abandoned Celebrations...read more

A Seat on the Train by writerlady

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. Well, back in New York we would call it the subway, but here in San Francisco it’s BART, which is a deceitful acronym for the Bay Area Rapid Transit, a lie in name because these trains never get you precisely where you need...read more

Best Wishes for Your Nuptials by Cia

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. You are getting married. My fingertips lose the feeling of the pages they hold up and the blood drains from my limbs, my face, all drawing back into my gut. A tingle circulates through my body that pricks at every nerve ending...read more

The Sixth of June. by Katteridg

I read about it in the paper, in the subway, on my way to work. I read about it when I woke up, during my lunch break, and before I went to bed. I read about it constantly, obsessively, and neurotically. I just could not get it out of my head. She noticed...read more

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